Logline: Austin and Vincent tires to sabotage each other with every thing they do.
Austin wakes up and then he looks straight forward. On the wall there is a picture of Vincent. Then the camera goes back to Austin's face again and on his face there is a serious look on his face. Then is a wide shot it shows Austin throwing a dart at Vincents head. It then cuts to the picture and in Vincent's forehead there is a dart in it.
Vincent wakes up with a start and then he looks down at the bat in his lap. He looks up and he sees a apple with a picture of Austin on it. Vincent then gets up and walks to the apple. He then takes up the bat and put it over his head. Then with a crashing blow he bring the bat down on the apple and breaks it in a lot of little pieces.
After both Austin and Vincent started to think how they were going get each another today. For example Austin thought in his head he was in Vincents room and setting up something over the door so when he opens the door the thing will come crashing down on his head.
Vincent on the other had thought of doing something to the bathroom either sabotaging the shower with a wrench in his hand so that it will only pour out cold water. Or before he leaves he he locks the door and closes it so that Austin can not get in to use the bathroom.
Then Austin goes down stairs to find something to put over the door so that his plan can be put in motion. Austin looked at a book that was really heavy, then looked at a pail full of water and last he looked a a plant that he saw he can use. Austin decides to go with the book in the end and he took the book up stairs.
Vincent on the other had thought that he was going to lock Austin out of the bathroom. So in split screen Austin and Vincent went to their destination just so that they can set up their traps. Austin went in and opened the door to Vincent's room a crack and put the book on top of the door and the door frame just enough so when Vincent opens the door the book will come down on his head. Vincent on the other hand finished using the bathroom and then he turn around and turns the lock from the inside. He then walks out and pulling the door shut behind him.
Then Austin and Vincent pass each other and could't wait for their plans to work. As Vincent walked in to the book the book fell from the place it was set up. Out side Austin heard a thunk and knew that his plan had worked. Austin then walked to the bathroom door and tured the knob. But to his surprise the door will not open. He tried opening the door much more fericously but the door still will not open. At that moment open felt that he was lighter then before so he looked down and saw that there was a black spot on his pants. Then it cutts to his face as he says oh crap and Vincent heard that and knew his trapped worked.
Friday, February 20, 2009
Saturday, February 14, 2009
intercutting treatment
Logline: A boy makes breakfast and walks away to pack his backpack while two boys goes into the kitchen and finds the breakfast eats it and leaves.
A boy makes breakfast of eggs, bagels, a sandwich, and oatmeal. Then he leaves to go pack his backpack and get a book to read while he is eating. He also leaves his cell phone on the table.
When he leaves two boys come in. They see the breakfast lying there on the table.
One boys looks at the close up of eggs, then he looks at the close up of sandwich, then he looks at the close up of bagel, and finally he looks at the close up of oatmeal. But those boys decide that he does not want the breakfast and leaves. He also sees the cell phone with a close up but he decides to leave the cell phone alone to.
The boys who made the breakfast have just finish packing and are going to get his book, at the same time the other boys is looking as the breakfast.
The second boy looks at the close up egg, close up the bagel, close the sandwich, and close oatmeal with the same expression and then decides to eat the breakfast and before he leaves with the same expression he sees the cell phone close up.
split screen as he is eating the breakfast the boys who made it is walking towards the kitchen now with the book he is going to read. Just before the boy comes in to the kitchen with the book the boy that ate the breakfast left. The second boy also leaves the cell phone a lone .
When the boys gets back he was surprise that his breakfast was missing and he was annoyed that he will have to make another breakfast again really fast so that he can still get to the bus to school in time.
A boy makes breakfast of eggs, bagels, a sandwich, and oatmeal. Then he leaves to go pack his backpack and get a book to read while he is eating. He also leaves his cell phone on the table.
When he leaves two boys come in. They see the breakfast lying there on the table.
One boys looks at the close up of eggs, then he looks at the close up of sandwich, then he looks at the close up of bagel, and finally he looks at the close up of oatmeal. But those boys decide that he does not want the breakfast and leaves. He also sees the cell phone with a close up but he decides to leave the cell phone alone to.
The boys who made the breakfast have just finish packing and are going to get his book, at the same time the other boys is looking as the breakfast.
The second boy looks at the close up egg, close up the bagel, close the sandwich, and close oatmeal with the same expression and then decides to eat the breakfast and before he leaves with the same expression he sees the cell phone close up.
split screen as he is eating the breakfast the boys who made it is walking towards the kitchen now with the book he is going to read. Just before the boy comes in to the kitchen with the book the boy that ate the breakfast left. The second boy also leaves the cell phone a lone .
When the boys gets back he was surprise that his breakfast was missing and he was annoyed that he will have to make another breakfast again really fast so that he can still get to the bus to school in time.
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