Logline: A family moves into a cabin in Lake Tahoe and their son get a flesh eating virus.
Treatment: A family is going up to Lake Tahoe and rents a cabin for about a week. The family then drives from the ski resort to their cabin. When the family gets to the cabin they see it very secluded and old.
When the family goes in to the cabin they find it very dirty and unfurnished. They scout all the surroundings and see how it is and where the rooms are. Later the father tells the son to help him unload the car with their things while the mother and daughter relax in the cabin.
When the son and the father leave the mother and daughter went to explore the cabin a little more when they here out of the blue a scream of pain. They rush to the living room of the cabin in time to see the father burst through the door with the son in his hands. On the sons arms is a large gash.
The mother asked what the heck happened. The father says, “While Ross was unloading some of the ski equipments one of the ski poles fell out and cut his arm bad. We showed clean out the wound the best we can and then bandage it up.” The mother agrees and quickly gets out the first aid kit and cleans up the wound as best as she could. Then she and the father bandage up Ross’s arm.
After they bandage up his arm they helped him to a bed and told him to sleep they will get the rest of the gear themselves. After Ross goes to bed the mother and father goes out with flashlights and carefully took everything out of the car and carried it inside. After they finish getting everything inside the cabin the mother, father, and the daughter went to sleep.
However the next day the mother was in the kitchen when the father came walking in followed by the daughter. 5 minutes later Ross comes in complaining that his arm hurts. The mother ask him if he was feeling well because he look like he had a fever at the same time his arm looked really red. She told him to take a Motrin IB and go to bed.
An hour later the mother came into the room to check on Ross when he was sleeping. She had the first aid kit so she can change the bandage that cover Ross’s wound. However when she peeled the wound looked very red and it started give off a foal odor.
The mother quickly changes the bandage and leaves. However she tells the father what happened. The father said if it gets worse in another 2 day we should call the doctor. The next day went by the same as the day before however the wound on Ross’s arm started to turn blue and have a lot of boil like blisters. She quickly changes the bandage and walked out. The next day the wound got even worse they called a doctor the doctor asked the symptoms and then prescribe medications and call him or go to the ER if it got worse. The mother and father then went and got the medication for Ross and when they got home they gave him the medication. An hour later they went to check up on him and they saw that they wound have gotten even worse and out of fear they took him to the ER.
When they got to the ER the nurses wheeled Ross into a room the doctor then came in the check on Ross and the wound. When the doctor saw Ross’s arm he ask how long ago did he get this wound. The Father said that my son got the wound 4 days ago. The doctor said that I am sorry to tell you this but you son has the virus or bacteria Necrotizing Fascitis which is a flesh eating virus.
The only way that we can treat your son at this stage is to cut off his arm to stop the bacteria from spreading to the rest of the body because is it spreads to the rest of the body your son will die. So the doctor wheeled Ross into the surgery room and amputated his arm. After they amputated his arm Ross got better and today he now lives a happy life in Beverly Hills with his wife and two sons and became a very famous artist.
Thursday, May 14, 2009
Monday, May 11, 2009
final treatment
Logline: A Jock is being stalked by a girl who just will not leave him alone.
Treatment: 7 o’ clock a boy named Travis pulls up to school in a car. Travis is a football player for the Capuchino football team. He is the quarterback on the team and he is an honor student who has a 4.0 GPA.
When Travis gets to school a girl named Jennifer who he knows from his bio class walks up to him. She says here is something that I made you. Travis says thanks as he sees macaroni picture fame with Jennifer’s picture in it and then he walks away and meets his friends at the opening to the school. They are all talking about the picture and what he should do with it until the bell ring they go to their classes.
After their first period during passing period Travis takes the picture and puts in his locker. He then closes his locker, but, as he turns around he sees Jennifer standing right behind him. He was very surprise and told Jennifer that she scared him. He asks her what he can do for her. She says here is a poem that I wrote for you.
He takes the poem and says thanks and walks away to second period. He reads the poem before he gets into class and says to himself that if she gives him another thing that is a picture of her or anything that she writes to show her love to him he will have o tell her to stop.
After second he goes to his third period which is biology. When he gets into class Jennifer approaches him again this time giving him a photo she create in photoshop of them together.
Travis says to Jennifer this got to stop, you got to making things or writing things for me, Can you please just leave me alone. Then he takes his seat and finished third period.
After third period Jennifer did not talks to Travis again. However during practice Travis saw Jennifer standing on the hill watching the football team practice. After practice Travis went to his locker and sees a lot of paper lying around. When he opens his locker he sees the whole locker is decorated with Jennifer’s picture and loves notes all over. He quickly get his stuff and start to rip the picture off and cleaning his locker of Jennifer’s touch then he slams the locker shut and starts to walk away.
However as he walks to his car he hears feet walking a little behind him. When he looks over his shoulder he sees Jennifer, his eyes widen and he starts to break into a run. He runs all the way to the car and is able to get the door open and closed with Jennifer still close behind him. He very scared now tries to get the key into the key hole but instead drops the keys. When he reaches and picks it up and then gets into sitting position he sees Jennifer right at the window starring at him.
He screams out in fear when he sees Jennifer standing there and quickly fits the key into the key hole starts the car and tears off without looking back. However he sees in his rear view mirror Jennifer also jumping into a car and tearing after him. He goes through all these roads and eventually looses her.
After he looses her he heads home. But when he gets home and goes to his room he sees his room covered in pictures of Jennifer and he also sees Jennifer staring at him through the window.
He screams extremely loud as he jumps up in bed. He looks around and sees his room as it usually is with everything that he put up and there were not pictures or anything of Jennifer’s. He sighs and says it hew it’s only a dream when he notices someone in the corner dark corner. He says who are you. The person replies it is me and walks out of the darkness and to Travis’s surprise there stood Jennifer.
Treatment: 7 o’ clock a boy named Travis pulls up to school in a car. Travis is a football player for the Capuchino football team. He is the quarterback on the team and he is an honor student who has a 4.0 GPA.
When Travis gets to school a girl named Jennifer who he knows from his bio class walks up to him. She says here is something that I made you. Travis says thanks as he sees macaroni picture fame with Jennifer’s picture in it and then he walks away and meets his friends at the opening to the school. They are all talking about the picture and what he should do with it until the bell ring they go to their classes.
After their first period during passing period Travis takes the picture and puts in his locker. He then closes his locker, but, as he turns around he sees Jennifer standing right behind him. He was very surprise and told Jennifer that she scared him. He asks her what he can do for her. She says here is a poem that I wrote for you.
He takes the poem and says thanks and walks away to second period. He reads the poem before he gets into class and says to himself that if she gives him another thing that is a picture of her or anything that she writes to show her love to him he will have o tell her to stop.
After second he goes to his third period which is biology. When he gets into class Jennifer approaches him again this time giving him a photo she create in photoshop of them together.
Travis says to Jennifer this got to stop, you got to making things or writing things for me, Can you please just leave me alone. Then he takes his seat and finished third period.
After third period Jennifer did not talks to Travis again. However during practice Travis saw Jennifer standing on the hill watching the football team practice. After practice Travis went to his locker and sees a lot of paper lying around. When he opens his locker he sees the whole locker is decorated with Jennifer’s picture and loves notes all over. He quickly get his stuff and start to rip the picture off and cleaning his locker of Jennifer’s touch then he slams the locker shut and starts to walk away.
However as he walks to his car he hears feet walking a little behind him. When he looks over his shoulder he sees Jennifer, his eyes widen and he starts to break into a run. He runs all the way to the car and is able to get the door open and closed with Jennifer still close behind him. He very scared now tries to get the key into the key hole but instead drops the keys. When he reaches and picks it up and then gets into sitting position he sees Jennifer right at the window starring at him.
He screams out in fear when he sees Jennifer standing there and quickly fits the key into the key hole starts the car and tears off without looking back. However he sees in his rear view mirror Jennifer also jumping into a car and tearing after him. He goes through all these roads and eventually looses her.
After he looses her he heads home. But when he gets home and goes to his room he sees his room covered in pictures of Jennifer and he also sees Jennifer staring at him through the window.
He screams extremely loud as he jumps up in bed. He looks around and sees his room as it usually is with everything that he put up and there were not pictures or anything of Jennifer’s. He sighs and says it hew it’s only a dream when he notices someone in the corner dark corner. He says who are you. The person replies it is me and walks out of the darkness and to Travis’s surprise there stood Jennifer.
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