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short film treatment

Anthony's morning
Ring ring ring goes the alarm. Anthony was getting up he strenches and goes to the bathroom takes a shower. Then he shaves, eat breakfast, drinks his coffee, brush his teeth and gets dressed. After he gets his keys go to the car and drives to work.

Paul's morning

Beep beep beep beep, goes another alarm. A hand comes crashing down on the alarm as it turns off the alarm. After that Paul continues to sleep on. Just then Paul jump up looked at the alarm he just turned off. It said 8:30 a.m He had oversleep and was going to be late. He jumps out of bed. thrown on whatever clothes he can find. eats a hurried breakfast and jumps in his car and leaves.


THe office building
Just then the two car pulled up in front of the building. THey both get out just then they see each other. Paul and Anthony started to run towards the door. THey both get there at the same time and are stuck. THey struggle to get in and they tumble to the ground. They get up punch in and dust themselves off. THen they go to their cubicle. THen their boss called them into the his office. He told them that they would have to compete against each other to try and win the position of vice president. THen the to employees started to compete and sabatage each other. Paul was typing a really complex code and making a presentation when he got up and left Anthony walked in a deleted everything and put in unsensable data. WHen PAul came back he saw all his work was destoryed. SO in retaliation after Anothny printed out his work Paul walked passed and spilled coffee on it. THen they got more ferious and as they finally got to the point where they got violent. THey got into a fight to see who will win.

Just then the boss saw them fighting. THe boss ask them what they were fighting about and they told him the open posistion. Oh my bad said the boss the position was for managar of one of our stores in washington not Vice President I filled that job two days ago. Paul and ANthony looked at each other and shook hands and left. THey became friend and stop competeing.

short film treatment

Logline: In a future a family gathering between two brother get violent as their sibiling rivalry gets out of hand.

One morning a man gets up . He checks a pda. He sees that there is a message. He opens it and a hologram of his brother beams out. THe hologram told his brother about the family gather and what time it was. He goes and get dressed. He gets in his Car and drives to his brother's house.When he gets there the family is are getting together and talking and eating.

Just then the two brother start talking about their job. Just then brother started a competitive age as they started to play the game. Just then the two of them got really competitive and as they started to play basketball and pingpong.

Just then the two brother got to the last game a boxing match. They started attacking each other and one of the brother won and lost. After the match their rivalry stoped and they got together again.

Just then they start coming together and having fun again.

short film inspiration

In how 'bout this weather is taking about a sibling rivalry that get out of hand and attack other people. The shots were good at conveying the feeling of each character. The dialogue that is used in between the two brothers and the hate that they feel for each other and how they dread to see each other and is shown through the The shots would cut towards the emotions of the characters with the way that others react to them.
The full shots at the family is talking shows the two sides clashing as they talk about their job. The mis en scene of the light is shown down to support the two separate sides.
The cuts were fast and short to emphasis the split between the two brothers as they attack each other and destroy and hurt each others family. The acting was very convincing in the sense that the two brothers were really brothers and had built up frustration and then they are actually doing anything that they can to attack each other. The clothing was very connected to the kind of status that each brother lived. While one is dressed elegantly as he is rich when the other is dressed more like a middle class man. The story is very straight forward and comedic like because it is about an sibling rivalry that get out of hand and eventually make both brother alone as they are still fighting. I like it because it shows two brothers who are in different classes instead of helping each other they are trying to destroy each other and insut each other as their rivalry gets out of hand.

It will be a combination between comedy and sci-fi. I will blend the two together to create an idea that will bring out a laugh from audience.

A possible log line
In a future there is a family gathering and a sibling rivalry gets out of hand and the brothers end up fighting with each other.

brother getting together

brother rivalry starts.

gets into a bloody fight

gets back together.

reaserch script

THe philosophy of sciences fiction is that fantasy and mystical realism taking place in a futuristic world. one of it founders were Georage Melies through his movie travel to the moon. Also another founder that pushed Sciences fiction even futher was the director George Lucas with his famous movie Star wars. ALso some of the founders actors Buck Roger and Flash Gorden. ANother film that came before star wars was 20,000 leagues under the sea by Jules Vernes. they influenced the genera with the ideas of things that could not be done and this things made the genera more and more interesting because it was life that we can not see everyday.

THe idea I want to pursue is the way western influence on the kind of cutural background of the director and how this influence shaped the kind of science fiction movie they want to make. For example the movie of district nine is shaped my the director growing up in South Africa during the time of apartheid and how the story shows the combination between the fight of aliens and humans as the struggle between balck and white. Like in Avatar it is talking about the culture of americans and our past with the struggle of Idians against the whites as they moved west. ANother movie is the host and it shows the western influence of the Americans on the East. It is about a best htat attacks and kills everything in it path and abducts a person which makes the family start to fight back to save the person. Through this it shows western influence of nuclear substance and how the western influence had spread and how it influence the people.