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short film treatment

Anthony's morning
Ring ring ring goes the alarm. Anthony was getting up he strenches and goes to the bathroom takes a shower. Then he shaves, eat breakfast, drinks his coffee, brush his teeth and gets dressed. After he gets his keys go to the car and drives to work.

Paul's morning

Beep beep beep beep, goes another alarm. A hand comes crashing down on the alarm as it turns off the alarm. After that Paul continues to sleep on. Just then Paul jump up looked at the alarm he just turned off. It said 8:30 a.m He had oversleep and was going to be late. He jumps out of bed. thrown on whatever clothes he can find. eats a hurried breakfast and jumps in his car and leaves.


THe office building
Just then the two car pulled up in front of the building. THey both get out just then they see each other. Paul and Anthony started to run towards the door. THey both get there at the same time and are stuck. THey struggle to get in and they tumble to the ground. They get up punch in and dust themselves off. THen they go to their cubicle. THen their boss called them into the his office. He told them that they would have to compete against each other to try and win the position of vice president. THen the to employees started to compete and sabatage each other. Paul was typing a really complex code and making a presentation when he got up and left Anthony walked in a deleted everything and put in unsensable data. WHen PAul came back he saw all his work was destoryed. SO in retaliation after Anothny printed out his work Paul walked passed and spilled coffee on it. THen they got more ferious and as they finally got to the point where they got violent. THey got into a fight to see who will win.

Just then the boss saw them fighting. THe boss ask them what they were fighting about and they told him the open posistion. Oh my bad said the boss the position was for managar of one of our stores in washington not Vice President I filled that job two days ago. Paul and ANthony looked at each other and shook hands and left. THey became friend and stop competeing.