Logline: A Jock is being stalked by a girl who just will not leave him alone.
Treatment: 7 o’ clock a boy named Travis pulls up to school in a car. Travis is a football player for the Capuchino football team. He is the quarterback on the team and he is an honor student who has a 4.0 GPA.
When Travis gets to school a girl named Jennifer who he knows from his bio class walks up to him. She says here is something that I made you. Travis says thanks as he sees macaroni picture fame with Jennifer’s picture in it and then he walks away and meets his friends at the opening to the school. They are all talking about the picture and what he should do with it until the bell ring they go to their classes.
After their first period during passing period Travis takes the picture and puts in his locker. He then closes his locker, but, as he turns around he sees Jennifer standing right behind him. He was very surprise and told Jennifer that she scared him. He asks her what he can do for her. She says here is a poem that I wrote for you.
He takes the poem and says thanks and walks away to second period. He reads the poem before he gets into class and says to himself that if she gives him another thing that is a picture of her or anything that she writes to show her love to him he will have o tell her to stop.
After second he goes to his third period which is biology. When he gets into class Jennifer approaches him again this time giving him a photo she create in photoshop of them together.
Travis says to Jennifer this got to stop, you got to making things or writing things for me, Can you please just leave me alone. Then he takes his seat and finished third period.
After third period Jennifer did not talks to Travis again. However during practice Travis saw Jennifer standing on the hill watching the football team practice. After practice Travis went to his locker and sees a lot of paper lying around. When he opens his locker he sees the whole locker is decorated with Jennifer’s picture and loves notes all over. He quickly get his stuff and start to rip the picture off and cleaning his locker of Jennifer’s touch then he slams the locker shut and starts to walk away.
However as he walks to his car he hears feet walking a little behind him. When he looks over his shoulder he sees Jennifer, his eyes widen and he starts to break into a run. He runs all the way to the car and is able to get the door open and closed with Jennifer still close behind him. He very scared now tries to get the key into the key hole but instead drops the keys. When he reaches and picks it up and then gets into sitting position he sees Jennifer right at the window starring at him.
He screams out in fear when he sees Jennifer standing there and quickly fits the key into the key hole starts the car and tears off without looking back. However he sees in his rear view mirror Jennifer also jumping into a car and tearing after him. He goes through all these roads and eventually looses her.
After he looses her he heads home. But when he gets home and goes to his room he sees his room covered in pictures of Jennifer and he also sees Jennifer staring at him through the window.
He screams extremely loud as he jumps up in bed. He looks around and sees his room as it usually is with everything that he put up and there were not pictures or anything of Jennifer’s. He sighs and says it hew it’s only a dream when he notices someone in the corner dark corner. He says who are you. The person replies it is me and walks out of the darkness and to Travis’s surprise there stood Jennifer.
2 comments:
first of all, i like ur idea of this horror treatment. I like how u first start the treatment with the love environment and then when the movie goes on, it become more scary and at the climax that freaks everyone out. the second thing is that, if we are going to shoot this treatment for the movie, it will be easier, but first we need to make sure we have enough people to play the football team, and the main character needs to know how to drive; perhaps we even need to borrow a room from one of us. So these could be the problem we need to consider, other than that, i think this can be a really good movie.
The boy waking up from a dream is too predictable. Maybe when she notices that the boy rips the picture of him and Jennifer in half, Jennifer could go into a rage and pose actual harm to him. Maybe she could be crazy that she even tries to kill him. If your trying to make this somewhat of a horror film, this would probably be a better alternative.
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