treatment revised

Logline: Austin and Vincent tires to sabotage each other with every thing they do.

Austin wakes up and then he looks straight forward. On the wall there is a picture of Vincent. Then the camera goes back to Austin's face again and on his face there is a serious look on his face. Then is a wide shot it shows Austin throwing a dart at Vincents head. It then cuts to the picture and in Vincent's forehead there is a dart in it.

Vincent wakes up with a start and then he looks down at the bat in his lap. He looks up and he sees a apple with a picture of Austin on it. Vincent then gets up and walks to the apple. He then takes up the bat and put it over his head. Then with a crashing blow he bring the bat down on the apple and breaks it in a lot of little pieces.

After both Austin and Vincent started to think how they were going get each another today. For example Austin thought in his head he was in Vincents room and setting up something over the door so when he opens the door the thing will come crashing down on his head.

Vincent on the other had thought of doing something to the bathroom either sabotaging the shower with a wrench in his hand so that it will only pour out cold water. Or before he leaves he he locks the door and closes it so that Austin can not get in to use the bathroom.

Then Austin goes down stairs to find something to put over the door so that his plan can be put in motion. Austin looked at a book that was really heavy, then looked at a pail full of water and last he looked a a plant that he saw he can use. Austin decides to go with the book in the end and he took the book up stairs.

Vincent on the other had thought that he was going to lock Austin out of the bathroom. So in split screen Austin and Vincent went to their destination just so that they can set up their traps. Austin went in and opened the door to Vincent's room a crack and put the book on top of the door and the door frame just enough so when Vincent opens the door the book will come down on his head. Vincent on the other hand finished using the bathroom and then he turn around and turns the lock from the inside. He then walks out and pulling the door shut behind him.

Then Austin and Vincent pass each other and could't wait for their plans to work. As Vincent walked in to the book the book fell from the place it was set up. Out side Austin heard a thunk and knew that his plan had worked. Austin then walked to the bathroom door and tured the knob. But to his surprise the door will not open. He tried opening the door much more fericously but the door still will not open. At that moment open felt that he was lighter then before so he looked down and saw that there was a black spot on his pants. Then it cutts to his face as he says oh crap and Vincent heard that and knew his trapped worked.